Tuesday, October 13, 2015

ELEMENTS OF PROSE FICTION

There are five elements of fiction:
  *Plot
  *Characterization
  *Theme
  *Setting
  *Point of View
 
 



Plot
The sequence of incidents or events through which an author constructs a story.  *The plot is not merely the action itself, but the way the author arranges the action toward a specific end (structure).
Important elements of Plot: *Conflict- A clash of actions, ideas, desires, or wills
Types of Conflict:  Person vs. Person, Person vs. Environment, Person vs. Self.
*Protagonist- The central character in a conflict
*Antagonist- Any force arranged against the protagonist- whether persons, things, conventions of society, or the protagonists own personality traits.
*Suspense- The quality in a story that makes readers ask “what’s going to happen next?”.  In more literary forms of fiction the suspense involves more “why” than “what”. Usually produced through two devices; either mystery (an unusual set of circumstances for which the reader craves an explanation) or dilemma (a position in which a character must choose between two courses of action, both undesirable.)

Characterization
Characters are presented in two different ways- directly and indirectly
.•Direct Presentation- The reader is told straight out what the character is like
.•Indirect Presentation- The author shows the character through their actions; the reader determines what the character is like by what they say or do
Types of Characters
  * Flat Characters- Usually have one or two predominant traits.  The character can be summed up in just a few lines.
  *Round Characters- Complex and many faceted; have the qualities of real people. 
  * Stock Characters- A type of flat character.  The type of character that appears so often in fiction the reader recognizes them right away.
  *Static Character-  A character that remains essentially the same throughout.

Theme
The theme of a piece of fiction is its controlling idea or its central insight. It is the unifying generalization about life stated or implied by the story.
*Theme does not equal “moral”, “lesson”, or “message”.
Theme is the central and unifying concept of a story.  Therefore it accounts for all the major details of the story, is not contradicted by any detail of the story, and cannot rely upon supposed facts.
Setting.
The setting of a story is its overall context- where, when and in what circumstances the action occurs.
Setting as Place- The physical environment where the story takes place. The description of the environment often points towards its importance.
Setting as Time-  Includes time in all of its dimensions.  To determine the importance, ask, “what was going on at that time?”
Setting as Cultural Context-  Setting also involves the social circumstances of the time and place.  Consider historical events and social and political issues of the time.
Point of View.
Point of View is simply who is telling the story. *To determine POV ask, “who is telling the story”, and “how much do they know?”
Omniscient POV- The story is told in third person by a narrator who has unlimited knowledge of events and characters.
Third Person Limited POV- The story is told in third person but from the view point of a character in the story.  POV is limited to the character’s perceptions and shows no direct knowledge of what other characters are thinking, feeling, or doing.
 First Person POV- The author disappears into one of the characters.  Shares the limitations of third person limited.  Uses the pronouns “I” and “we”.
Second Person POV-  Uses the pronoun “you”.  Infrequentl

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Saturday, June 12, 2010

REVISION


Chapter 10 – The Maternal Instinct


Description

Laura – She has a face like the top of a motor – car battery. She was a little more than plump. Laura was vivacious, always gay and kind. Had a habit of using curse words with the children. She is also very abusive to one of her baby’s father who stayed around the longest, Nathaniel.

Values and Attitudes

Dislike for Nathaniel Though the men of Miguel Street agree that a woman should be beaten occasionally, they despise Nathaniel because of his contempt for women. “But what really sickened us was his attitude towards women. We were none of us chivalrous, but Nathaniel had a contempt for women which we couldn’t like. He would make rude remarks when women passed.”

Education Laura values education. She wanted her children to live a better life than she did. “It have nothing like education in the world. I don’t want my children to grow like me.”

Lesson Learnt: Children live what they learn. Laura lived a life of just making babies. She seemed very happy but deep down she was not. We realize this by the way she reacts to the news that Lorna was having a baby. Lorna obviously did not realize that her mother would be so distraught since this is what she was use to.

Theme

Appearance vs. Reality Nathaniel pretended that he was the one beating Laura. It later became evident to everyone that Laura was beating him.

Laura seemed happy but we know deep down that she was not since she does not want any of her children to follow in her footsteps. She said it was better for Lorna to have died than to live a life like hers.

Concept of Masculinity Nathaniel feels that he has to lie about beating Laura.

Women in Society Despite the fact that Laura seems powerless because she has so many children for different men, like Ms. Morgan we see that she has the upper hand of her man.

Chapter 11- The Blue Cart

Description

Hat – wise, talkative, knowledgeable, encouraging

Eddoes – Proud, man of leisure, hygienic, responsible, opportunist. He was a thin man

Narrator – impressionable, ambitious

Boyee – inquisitive, a joker, insensitive/ tactless.

Narrator’s Mother – jealous, harsh, likes scenery art.

Values and Attitudes

Work - Eddoes seems to value his work – He is very serious / focused when he is on the job. He appreciates the fact that this kind of job allows him the opportunity to collect “material”, which he uses to make extra money.

Education- Again, we see that Mr. Titus Hoyt values education. He started buying books from Eddoes for his new school

Lesson Learnt: If you have the right frame of mind and take your work seriously, no matter what kind of work it is, you will be noticed or recognized. Eddoes was said to take his aristocrat job seriously which got him recognition from both the people of Miguel Street and his employers.


Take advantage of all your opportunities. In the chapter we can see that Eddoes took full advantage of his opportunity to sell garbage and turned it into a business.


Themes

Male Bonding: The theme of male bonding is very important and was shown or highlighted in many sections of the chapter. For example the theme appeared when Eddoes was in trouble due to the baby issues. He went to the men of Miguel Street for advice and encouragement. The men in turn supported him even when they saw the child and realized it wasn’t his.

Concept of

Masculinity: Eddoes seem to reject the common notion that the male is only a sperm “donor”. He accepts his responsibility as a father and takes care of his child, Pleasure.

Women in Society: The women of Miguel Street helped to raise Pleasure, showing how important their role in society is.


Chapter 12 – Love, Love, Love Alone


Description

Mrs. Hereira – Beautiful, seemingly genteel lady, well dressed. The narrator comments that she would have been more in place in an upper class society.

Toni – tall, thin, ugly Portuguese man with sickly looking skin, dirty, the worst dressed person, constantly drunk and smelt of alcohol, abusive.

Narrator’s mother – concerned, independent of men, doesn’t have a good opinion of men, intolerant of spousal abuse.


Values and Attitudes

Women – Toni’s attitude towards women is very negative. There seems to be a trend in the stories where the men constantly beat or treat their wives badly and even if they don’t, they boast about doing so. They do not show any appreciation for them until the women leave.


Lesson Learnt: People of various backgrounds may need your advice and support through hard times. Mrs. Hereira who refuses to leave her husband seeks advice from the narrator’s mom on many occasions. It is evident that the narrators mom is not as highly educated as Mrs. Hereira. This is evident due to the fact the narrator hyper - corrects her speech.


It is perfectly okay to truly love but love should nor force us into a situation where we accept abuse.

Themes

Love / Determination Mrs. Hereira insisted that she loved Toni, insisting that he had many good qualities, despite his persistent abuse. Everyone thought that she was better than him and could not understand how a woman like her could be involved with such a worthless person.


Women in Society - Despite the fact that the narrator’s mother did not know Mrs. Hereria she saw the need to help this woman in crisis. The narrator’s mother took care of Mrs. Hereira the many times she came asking for help after being beaten or threarned by Toni.


Chapter 13 – The Mechanical Genius

Chapter 14 – Caution


Description

Main Character / Bolo - Bolo is tall but not thin. He has a caricature face of sadness. His mouth is curled downward as well as his eyebrows. He has big eyes that are empty of expression. Bolo only laughed in sarcasm. He had a habit of only barbering on Sundays. He also could hold a grudge as shown with the incidents involving the newspaper. At the end we see a case of insanity with Bolo as he thought that all Trinidadians lie when it was him not trusting anyone.

Values and Attitudes

Trinidad - Bolo seems to have a negative attitude towards everything and everyone associated with Trinidad, especially the news papers. He has been deceived so many times before that now he lives an overly cautious life, to the point of paranoia.

The narrator - He seems to value his relationship with the narrator. He even benefits from the relationship by having the narrator check the papers for him when he starts buying sweepstake tickets. Their bond is broken at the end of the chapter.


Lesson Learnt: Something is not always what it appears to be. An example of this can be seen with the housing scam where in the initial stage of the scheme some pictures were taken of people with keys to their new homes. Shortly the man ran off with all the investors’ money.

Never let your emotions get the better of you. Bolo lost his temper and attacked the sub – editor but this did not help in any way a part from feeding his temper.


You should not live your life putting all your trust in something or an individual but you cannot live life without trusting at all.

Themes:

Appearance vs. Reality/

Deception This is shown in Bolo’s life in multiple ways. An instance is when Bolo was tricked by the philanthropist. Another instant is when Bolo thought he was on his way to Venezuela but instead was released in a swamp area.

Bonding Bolo confided in the narrator.

Dreams and Aspiration Bolo wishes to be rich. He aspires towards moving out of Trinidad.

Chapter 15 – Until the Soldiers Came

Description

Edward – artist, had a habit of giving away ties he had decorated, thin initially but he worked out and became muscular.


Edward’s wife – tall, thin, white skinned, looked pale and perpetually unwell, very miserable, suicidal

Values and Attitudes - Edward seems to be after the American dream to the extent that he went and got himself an American wife.

Key Principles You cannot hide from who you really are. Edward dresses American, talks American and distances himself from the Miguel Street by only associating with Americans. He thought this would make him happy but the more he changes is the more miserable he becomes.

Themes:

Change Edward changes his lifestyle. He distances himself from everybody and ends up alone.

Appearance vs. Reality Everybody was of the impression that something was wrong with Edward’s wife why they could not have a child but it was revealed in the end that the problem lied with Edward.

Dreams and Aspiration Edward wants the American dream / to live a prosperous life.

Chapter 16 - Hat

Description of Characters

Hat – jovial, friendly, loves sports, enjoys reading the newspapers, pretentious, violent.

Boyee and

Errol – These two young men are the nephews of Hat who lived with him. They were jovial and always spoke their minds. They often butted into people’s conversations. Hat referred to them as his illegitimate children.

Eddoes - A boastful garbage collector of Miguel Street. He was always boasting about the people he knew. He was a very clean person.


Themes

Women in Society – Although Hat never beats Dolly it is evident that she is made to feel that her place is staying in the home. She left for another man and he almost killed her.

Male Bonding - This theme is shown where Hat rounded up the twelve boys and took them to the cricket match. He treated them to sodas.

We also see where the narrator admits that he suffered with Hat. In fact, the entire community seemed to have shut down when they “lost” Hat. (When Hat left Miguel Street became dull. The club was dead, nobody played cricket anymore and nobody hung out under the lamp – post outside Hat’s house.)

Hat admits that when Edward left the house and when he married, he was negatively affected. It seemed as though he was losing a dear friend.
All the men were present at the court trial in support of their friend.


Change Hat realizes that all the young men are maturing and soon they will be independent, stepping out to start their own lives. He is also not able to accept the fact that Edward has his own family. When he realizes all these changes he becomes more miserable and starts to travel to the city more regularly. He brings back a female, named Dolly with him who seems to be a back – up plan for companionship.

Masculinity Hat pretends to be the father of the 12 boys he takes to the cricket match. This again shows that the men of Miguel Street believe that they will be more highly favoured or they will be seen as great men based on the number of children that they have.

Values and Attitude

Law There seems to be very little regard for Law in Miguel Street. Hat for example, always gets in trouble with the law. He participated in gambling, cockfighting and he was accused of adding water to the milk he sold.

Treatment of Women Although Hat treats his woman well inside the house, he didn’t
introduce her to any of his friends in Miguel Street. He keeps Dolly in the house, leaving her no choice other than to look through the window like a “house rat”. Neighbours saw her a few times and they could say that she is a good- for-nothing . Probably this wouldn’t have been their opinion if she had the opportunity to socialize with them.

Boyee and Errol comment that the house is better now that a woman is there. We are left to assume that they may be saying this due to the fact that a woman is there to provide warm meals, clean etc.(Woman – natural ingredient in the home)

Hat doesn’t seem to appreciate Dolly because he spends most of his time with the boys. We are left to wonder in the end if it was love that drove him to commit the crime or if it was simply the fact that he felt disrespected.

Wednesday, March 24, 2010

The Interaction of the Different Worlds

For the Standardized test, you will need to be able to:
1. Identify the different worlds that you have met thus far
2. Name the characters who represent / come from the different places
3. Explain how each of these worlds interact
4. Explain what the similarities are that are shared by these different worlds
5. Explain what the differences are


The Different Worlds = The Amazons, The fairy world, The upper class world of the Atheneian Court, The Working class world of the mechanicals.

Differences
Amazon (shown in the play through Hippolyta)
- Ruled by women
- Serious

Upper Class Athenian World
- Ruled by men – Theseus represents the male power
- Fathers dictates valued over personal choice
- Love is expected to take second place since there are arranged marriages
- serious

Fairy World
- King and Queen seem to have equal power
- Love takes precedence, and is even assisted by magic
- Serious and comical

World of the Mechanicals
- Freedom dominant – The men decide that they will put on a play for the Duke’s wedding
- No women
- Ruled by theatre (rules of playwriting and acting)
- Humorous

Similarities
- Life complicated by love or desire
- Power struggles
- Conflict
- Gender wars/ differences

Thursday, February 18, 2010

6th Weekly

AS WAS PROMISED, HERE ARE THE TOPICS YOU WILL NEED TO REVISE FOR THE EXAM:

LANGUAGE

- Comprehension
- Descriptive Writing (person or place)
Please ensure that you utilise all that was taught on the topic, include your literary devices and appeal to all senses.

LITERATURE

- Definition of key terms related to drama and literature
- Identification of literary devices
- Essay question based on Act1 Scene 1
- relationship between Hermia and Helena, differences, similarities, roles of women in society, how do they conform or rebel, characterisation etc.

*********GOOD LUCK STUDYING*********

Sunday, November 22, 2009

read for sixth weekly



Ekwefi awakes Okonkwo very early in the morning and tells him that Ezinma is dying. Okonkwo ascertains that Ezinma has a fever and sets about frantically collecting medicine.

Nature of the relationship between Ekwefi and Ezinma
• Ezinma is Ekwefi's only child and the “center of her world.”
• Ekwefi is very lenient with her
• Ezinma calls her by her first name and the dynamic of their relationship approaches equality.
• Ekwefi receives a lot of comfort and companionship from her daughter.

Why the medicine man mutilated the body?
• Ekwefi's nine other children died in infancy.
• She developed the habit of naming them symbolic things such as “Onwumbiko,” which means, “Death, I implore you,” and “Ozoemena,” which means, “May it not happen again.”
• The body was mutilated so the spirit could not return

Female Bonding
• Okonkwo's wives constantly try to protect one another from his anger.
• Before Ezinma's birth, Ekwefi was not jealous of Okonkwo's first wife; she only expressed bitterness at her own misfortune.
• While Okonkwo gathers medicine for the fever, his other wives try to calm Ekwefi's fear.
• Ekwefi's friendship with Chielo, too, is an example of female bonding.
Language as a Sign of Cultural Difference

Language is an important theme in Things Fall Apart on several levels. In demonstrating the imaginative, often formal language of the Igbo, Achebe emphasizes that Africa is not the silent or incomprehensible country that books such as Heart of Darkness made it out to be. Rather, by peppering the novel with Igbo words, Achebe shows that the Igbo language is too complex for direct translation into English. Similarly, Igbo culture cannot be understood within the framework of European colonialist values. Achebe also points out that Africa has many different languages: the villagers of Umuofia, for example, make fun of Mr. Brown's translator because his language is slightly different from their own.

On a macroscopic level, it is extremely significant that Achebe chose to write Things Fall Apart in English—he clearly intended it to be read by the West at least as much, if not more, than by his fellow Nigerians. His goal was to critique and emend / alter the portrait of Africa that was painted by so many writers of the colonial period. Doing so required the use of English, the language of those colonial writers. Through his inclusion of proverbs, folktales, and songs translated from the Igbo language, Achebe managed to capture and convey the rhythms, structures, cadences, and beauty of the Igbo language.

Analysis: Chapters Fourteen–Sixteen

Okonkwo's exile forces him into his motherland. He doesn't deal well with his misfortune because he is so intent on being as successful and influential as his father was poor and powerless. His initial lack of gratitude toward his mother's kinsmen is a transgression of Igbo cultural values. His exile also upsets him because it forces him to spend time in a “womanly” place. He remains unwilling to admit to, or come to terms with, the feminine side of his personality.

Unoka's words regarding the bitterness of failing alone are important considering Okonkwo's present situation. Like Unoka, Uchendu reminds Okonkwo that he does not suffer alone. Uchendu laments the loss of five of his wives, openly expressing his strong attachment to the women who have shared his life and borne his children. He mentions that his remaining wife is a young girl who “does not know her left from her right.” Youth, beauty, and sexual attractiveness are not the only things one should value in a wife, he argues. Uchendu also values wisdom, intelligence, and experience in a wife. Each and every death has caused him pain. Although we would not know it from Okonkwo, a father grieves for lost children just as a mother does.

The introduction of the European missionaries is not presented as a tragic event—it even contains some comical elements. The villagers, for example, mock the interpreter's dialect. They neither perceive the missionaries as a threat nor react violently like the village of Abame, even though the missionaries call their gods “false” outright. And the missionaries do not forcibly thrust Christianity on the villagers.

Considering the emphasis that the Igbo place on careful thought before violent action, Okonkwo's belief that the people of Abame should have armed themselves and killed the white men reflects a rash, violent nature that seems to clash with fundamental Igbo values. Throughout Things Fall Apart, Igbo customs and social institutions emphasize the wisdom of seeking a peaceful solution to conflict before a violent solution. Uchendu voices this social value when he states that the killing of the first white man was foolish, for the villagers of Abame did not even know what the man's intentions were.

The language that Achebe uses to describe the pleasure that Nwoye finds in Christianity reflects Umuofia's seeming need to be soothed physically as well as spiritually. Achebe sets up, from the beginning of the novel, a system of images that accentuate both the dry land and the tense atmosphere in the village. The image of the words of the hymn as raindrops relieving Nwoye's “parched soul” refers not only to relief from the arid, desertlike heat with which Africa is commonly associated but also to the act of bringing Nwoye out of his supposed ignorance and into enlightenment through Christianity. It begins to quench his thirst for answers that Igbo religion has not been able to provide him.

Analysis: Chapters Seventeen–Nineteen

Nwoye is drawn to Christianity because it seems to answer his long-held doubts about his native religion, specifically the abandonment of twin newborns and Ikemefuna's death. Furthermore, Nwoye feels himself exiled from his society because of his disbelief in its laws, and the church offers refuge to those whom society has cast out. The church's value system will allow twins to live, for example, which offers comfort to the pregnant woman who has had to endure the casting away to die of her four sets of newborn twins. Similarly, men without titles turn to Christianity to find affirmation of their individual worth. The osu are able to discard others' perception of them as members of an ostracized caste and enter the church as the equals of other converts.

Okonkwo, on the other hand, has good reason to reject Christianity. Should Mbanta not drive the missionaries away, his killing of Ikemefuna would lose part of its religious justification. The damage to his relationship with Nwoye also seems more pointless than before. Both matters become his mistake rather than the result of divine will. Moreover, men of high status like Okonkwo view the church as a threat because it undermines the cultural value of their accomplishments. Their titles and their positions as religious authorities and clan leaders lose force and prestige if men of lower status are not there—the great cannot be measured against the worthless if the worthless have disappeared.


Nwoye's conversion devastates Okonkwo. Although he has always been harsh with his son, Okonkwo still believes in Nwoye's potential to become a great clansman. Nwoye's rejection of Igbo values, however, strikes a dire blow to Okonkwo's hopes for him. Additionally, Nwoye's actions undermine Okonkwo's own status and prestige. It is, as Okonkwo thinks at the end of Chapter Seventeen, as though all of Okonkwo's hard work to distance himself from the legacy of his father has been destroyed. He sighs and thinks to himself: “Living fire begets cold impotent ash.”

Despite the challenges that the church represents, Mbanta is committed to peace and remains tolerant of the church's presence. Even with the converts' blatant disrespect of Umuofia's customs—rumor has it that a convert has killed a royal python—the clan leaders vote for a peaceful solution, deciding to ostracize rather than attack the Christians. Okonkwo is not happy with their decision and advocates a violent reaction. His mentality is somewhat ironic: he believes that the village should act against its cultural values in order to preserve them.

The arrival of the white colonists and their religion weakens the kinship bonds so central to Igbo culture. Ancestral worship plays an important role in Igbo religion, and conversion to Christianity involves a partial rejection of the Igbo structure of kinship. The Christians tell the Igbo that they are all brothers and sons of God, replacing the literal ties of kinship with a metaphorical kinship structure through God. The overjoyed response of a missionary to Nwoye's interest in attending school in another village—“Blessed is he who forsakes his father and his mother for my sake”—illustrates that the Christian church clearly recognizes Igbo kinship bonds as the central obstacle to the success of its missionaries.

Achebe does not present a clear-cut dichotomy of the white religion as evil and the Igbo religion as good. All along, the descriptions of many of the village's ceremonies and rituals have been tongue-in-cheek. But the Christian missionaries increasingly win converts simply by pointing out the fallacy of Igbo beliefs—for example, those about the outcasts. When the outcasts cut their hair with no negative consequence, many villagers come to believe that the Christian god is more powerful than their own. Achebe himself is the son of Nigerian Christians, and it is hard not to think of his situation, in Chapter Seventeen, when the narrator points out Okonkwo's worry: “Suppose when he died all his male children decided to follow Nwoye's steps and abandon their ancestors?”

Tone and mood

Tone
The tone refers to the writer’s attitude toward his subject. The writer’s attitude determines his tone. The tone may be critical, authoritarian, persuasive, sarcastic, humorous, enthusiastic etc. It is important to listen to the voice of the writer when trying to determine the tone.

Mood
Mood refers to the emotions experienced by the reader from the words and images used by the writer. Writers skillfully use words to create effects Particular moods can therefore be evoked by the careful choice of words. The mood or emotions experienced by the reader may be sad, reflective, happy, nostalgic etc.